1.I’m glad that I can get this chance,不仅存在语法错误(没有 I ‘m glad that这样的句型,that从句什么成分来的,主语??那I 呢?只有it is adj that……),而且比较低档, 改为I’m honored and delightful to get this golden opportunity,我很荣幸,也很高兴获得这样一个天赐良机。
2So I can’t help introducing myself at once虽然语法不错,但按照我们的习惯,很少人在谈到自我介绍时会说“我禁不住要立刻自我介绍……(怪怪的)”,改成So,please allow me to make a brief self-introduction to all of you here today!
3.My English name……naturally……不符合中国人自我介绍的习惯(一般都是先说中文名,再说英文名),,My name is Tang ZiJin ,of course(naturally用得很拗口),you can call me Kearns Jerry,that is my English name
4Everyone has a dream,平铺直叙,比较平淡,食之无味,如同鸡肋啊,这样美化一下,all people around the world cherish their dreams,which may be the same as the others’ ,or totally different from the others’,世界上所有人都有着他们自己的梦想,这个梦想也许和其他人的一样,或者完全不同
5Just use my dream to tell,是很不规范的中式英语,标准的英语是Just take my dream for example!!
6.When I was a little boy,it sound crazy,逻辑混乱,换成When I was a little boy,I was always be wondering it would be very,very crazy if I became a hacker one day in the future
7However,the dream is full ,the reality is slim可能人家听不懂,换个说法吧However,the fuller this(老是用the,听起来不爽) dream is ,the slimer the reality will surely be!
8Because I failed in the way twice不顺口,Because I failed twice in the same way
9So I am the first time I have failed很中式英语,so I failed the first time
10Time is flying换成Time is elapsing不是更妙吗???
11结尾部分不错 Thanks everybody换成 thank you so much for your concern!!!
12希望你能兑现200分的承诺 ,言而无信者一般都是……
13为了防止盗版 只能用图片了 白黑的 不好意思????如果我真心要盗版的话,我把图片下载过来,我一个一个字,一个一个字地打,无论三五几分钟,还是十天半个月,我一定能打完的,那结果…………你这种反盗版的措施……呃…… 除非你用马赛克……
My Dream
when I got settled, the total use of the microwave to do their own things to eat. One day, my father saw me, I am afraid to say that I grew up as a cook. I immediately shaken like a rattle-drum head, you said : "That is not my ideal. When I grow up I want to IT (information technology) industries. "
Yes, I bought a computer five years ago after his father, I am familiar with it day by day. Until last year, and I have formed a deep bond with it. From then on, I want success in the information technology industry to make contributions to the cause of national computer.
But my father said I could only do in the field "testing the game," is what the new game, and always let me play with, the report there will be any games. I think what he said is not their fault, I always play games recently, those who do not have a veteran like Flash.
In recent days, I sprouted out of a bad idea : I will be playing the game that the network server to the black. My account will revise the highest level. However, I Xiangliaoyouxiang, this is wrong, but was caught by the police network is not good. When hackers but also need high computer skills. As a member of the IT industry is my ideal, I would like to advance this goal, to improve their computer skills
当我闲得没事时,就总自己用微波炉做点东西吃。一天,爸爸看见我这样,说我长大恐怕是要当厨师了。我立刻把头摇得像拨浪鼓似的,说:“那不是我的理想,我长大想做IT(信息技术)行业。”
没错,自从五年前爸爸给我买来电脑后,我就一天天地熟悉它。到了去年,我已经和它结下了不解之缘。从那时候开始,我就想要在信息技术行业取得成就,为国家计算机事业做出贡献。
可是爸爸说我在这个行业中只能做“游戏测试员”,就是什么游戏新出来,总是先让我玩玩,报告游戏中有什么错误。我觉得他说的没有错,我最近一段时间老是玩游戏,那些FLASH之类的老也不用了。
最近几天,我萌生出了一个不好的想法:将我玩的那个网络游戏的服务器给黑了,将我的账号修改成最高级别。可是,我想了又想,这样做是不对的,而且被网络警察抓到也是不好的。而且当黑客也需要很高的电脑技术的。
成为IT行业的一员是我的理想,所以我要向这个目标前进,提高自己的电脑技术.
我现在十分想当一名黑客,大家一听黑客就会感到可怕,其实我想当一名好黑客,为国家和社会做出贡献。假如我长大真当了黑客。
我会小心翼翼地进入恐怖组织重大决策部门的网络,了解他们的最新动向,破坏他们的数据,放置最先进的电脑病毒,再给他们来一些电子炸弹,让他们的美梦成泡影。让他们尝尝我正义黑客的厉害,让我成为他们的恶梦,让他们一天都不得安宁。
我还会潜入暴力网络,把病毒散入其中,使暴力不在网上传播,让他们耗费巨资却苦不堪言,让他们收工了。
我还会跟坏黑客做斗争,我会给银行制造一些软件,使每个进行网上“抢劫”的歹徒不能得逞,只能束手就擒。
我还会为儿童造个绿色程序,确保网站不受那些坏黑客的攻击。
妈妈说:“要想当一名正义的黑客,必须从小刻苦学习,丰富自已的知识面,尤其要学好英语。”我的英语成绩不太理想,为了将来能当一名黑客,我正在努力地赶上,李老师也在帮助我。
相信我,长大一定会成为一名伸张正义的好黑客。
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When I got settled, the total use of the microwave to do their own things to eat. One day, my father saw me, I am afraid to say that I grew up as a cook. I immediately shaken like a rattle-drum head, you said : "That is not my ideal. When I grow up I want to IT (information technology) industries. "Yes, I bought a computer five years ago after his father, I am familiar with it day by day. Until last year, and I have formed a deep bond with it. From then on, I want success in the information technology industry to make contributions to the cause of national computer.But my father said I could only do in the field "testing the game," is what the new game, and always let me play with, the report there will be any games. I think what he said is not their fault, I always play games recently, those who do not have a veteran like Flash.In recent days, I sprouted out of a bad idea : I will be playing the game that the network server to the black. My account will revise the highest level. However, I Xiangliaoyouxiang, this is wrong, but was caught by the police network is not good. When hackers but also need high computer skills. As a member of the IT industry is my ideal, I would like to advance this goal, to improve their computer skills当我闲得没事时,就总自己用微波炉做点东西吃。一天,爸爸看见我这样,说我长大恐怕是要当厨师了。我立刻把头摇得像拨浪鼓似的,说:“那不是我的理想,我长大想做IT(信息技术)行业。” 没错,自从五年前爸爸给我买来电脑后,我就一天天地熟悉它。到了去年,我已经和它结下了不解之缘。从那时候开始,我就想要在信息技术行业取得成就,为国家计算机事业做出贡献。 可是爸爸说我在这个行业中只能做“游戏测试员”,就是什么游戏新出来,总是先让我玩玩,报告游戏中有什么错误。我觉得他说的没有错,我最近一段时间老是玩游戏,那些FLASH之类的老也不用了。 最近几天,我萌生出了一个不好的想法:将我玩的那个网络游戏的服务器给黑了,将我的账号修改成最高级别。可是,我想了又想,这样做是不对的,而且被网络警察抓到也是不好的。而且当黑客也需要很高的电脑技术的。成为IT行业的一员是我的理想,所以我要向这个目标前进,提高自己的电脑技术.
The word Bug means "bugs" or "bugs"; while in a computer system or a program, some of the flaws or problems that have not been discovered, people call it "bug" ".
Founder of "Bug"
Hebe Report
Hebe Report
Grace Hoeber (Murray Hopper Grace), is a computer expert for the work of the United States Navy, but also one of the earliest human language into the computer program. On behalf of the computer program error "bug" this name, it is taken by the hebe. One day in 1945, Heber the Harvard Mark II set good 17000 relay programming and technical personnel ongoing operation of the machine, it suddenly stopped working. So they climb up to find a cause, a moth found the giant computer inside a set of relay contacts, which is obviously because moths by light and heat to attract, and flew to the contact, and high voltage electrocution. So in the report, Heber with adhesive tape is adhered on the moths, and the "bug" to represent "a computer program error", "bug" this argument has been that continues to this day.
Finally, I hope to help you!
当我闲得没事时,就总自己用微波炉做点东西吃。一天,爸爸看见我这样,说我长大恐怕是要当厨师了。我立刻把头摇得像拨浪鼓似的,说:“那不是我的理想,我长大想做IT(信息技术)行业。”
没错,自从五年前爸爸给我买来电脑后,我就一天天地熟悉它。到了去年,我已经和它结下了不解之缘。从那时候开始,我就想要在信息技术行业取得成就,为国家计算机事业做出贡献。
可是爸爸说我在这个行业中只能做“游戏测试员”,就是什么游戏新出来,总是先让我玩玩,报告游戏中有什么错误。我觉得他说的没有错,我最近一段时间老是玩游戏,那些FLASH之类的老也不用了。
最近几天,我萌生出了一个不好的想法:将我玩的那个网络游戏的服务器给黑了,将我的账号修改成最高级别。可是,我想了又想,这样做是不对的,而且被网络警察抓到也是不好的。而且当黑客也需要很高的电脑技术的。 http://www.Hxen.coM 恒星英语学习网
成为IT行业的一员是我的理想,所以我要向这个目标前进,提高自己的电脑技术.
When I got settled, the total use of the microwave to do their own things to eat. One day, my father saw me, I am afraid to say that I grew up as a cook. I immediately shaken like a rattle-drum head, you said : "That is not my ideal. When I grow up I want to IT (information technology) industries. "Yes, I bought a computer five years ago after his father, I am familiar with it day by day. Until last year, and I have formed a deep bond with it. From then on, I want success in the information technology industry to make contributions to the cause of national computer. But my father said I could only do in the field "testing the game," is what the new game, and always let me play with, the report there will be any games. I think what he said is not their fault, I always play games recently, those who do not have a veteran like Flash. In recent days, I sprouted out of a bad idea : I will be playing the game that the network server to the black. My account will revise the highest level. However, I Xiangliaoyouxiang, this is wrong, but was caught by the police network is not good. When hackers but also need high computer skills. As a member of the IT industry is my ideal, I would like to advance this goal, to improve their computer skills.
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